The Place of Restitution (part 1) working title
"Wow, this
place is huge!" Quileya tilted her
head back and extended her neck. "I
didn't know it was going to be so white."
"According
the records, it was built nine centuries ago, by the former inhabitants, a
bug-like species called the Dorfflassen. Twelve legs, three eyes and very high
intelligence. Apparently they just
disappeared right after they completed the inner temple." Rothis flipped through the pages of an
invisible book hanging in the air.
"Doesn't make that much sense, considering It usually likes
mindless minions. And why would they disappear? Wouldn't It want them around for the
war?"
Quileya sucked
her neck back to its normal proportions.
"You're reading the records, check the most recent entries."
Rothis
frowned. "This is odd. Someone was here four years ago. Who would want to come here?"
"Maybe they
were sent, just like us."
"But
Awdendet said no one had been here for at least a century, when a master comes
to check that the sentience is at the same level of awareness."
"Then maybe
she came to wake up the sentience."
Rothis stopped
peering at the book that wasn't there and looked over at his companion. "She?"
With long blue
arms, Quileya gestured expansively at the large white hall they were standing
in. "This place has a female feel
to it. And there were soft feet in here."
"Plenty of
species have soft feet, it doesn't have to have been a female."
"Well, it
was. I think she was here because she
was desperate."
Rothis didn't
reply. In situations like these,
Quileya's talent for knowing things that should be unknowable generally turned
out to be more correct that the data he read from the surroundings. "So, a desperate - what was she?"
Quileya moved
forward on blue legs toward the other end of the hall, shuffling her feet on
the marble-like stone that made up all the surface area. Rothis followed her, bringing along the
records, which had transferred themselves to his mind. Whether she hadn't heard his question, or
just didn't know the answer yet, Quileya didn't respond as they walked in
silence down the hall.
Little by little,
Rothis became uncomfortably aware of a presence taking note of their
arrival. He tried not to look at the
ceiling, which seemed to have eyes trained on him and Quileya. She appeared not to notice anything, but with
Quileya, you could never tell.
Oftentimes she noticed much more than she let on.
They came to a
large door made of the same white stone, and only discernible by the border of
black that created a doorframe. Rothis
stepped forward and laid his hand on the door.
A moment later, it silently and slowly swung open, revealing a large
room carved from red stone with white and black patterns set into the
floor. Quileya squinted at the first
design and walked carefully up to it.
"There's writing in this. I think I can read it if--" and Quileya
squinted at the floor for a few moments while Rothis walked further into the
room. "Enter
the chamber of restitution- to be certain your debt is paid, no, your debt WILL be paid, no, hang
on." She swung out her neck and
looked at the writing from different angles.
"Hmm, let me try again. Enter the chamber of restitution - if you are
certain your debt is paid. Or will be paid, I'm not sure which. Let me look at the other messages."
"Are you
sure they're messages at all? It could
just be pieces of some ancient poem or something…" Rothis felt his red cheeks heat up as Quileya
delivered a withering glance at him.
"All right, I know what this place was built for, or rather, Who,
but still, what does restitution have to do with it? And I thought this was a temple, not a palace." He opened a mental image of the record book
from the hall and scanned page after page.
"It's
restitution all right; looks like those Dorflassen owed It some sort of
debt." She moved all around the
room as she surveyed each pattern message.
"So not only did they have to build It a big white temple-palace
thing, but then they--" Quileya
scrunched up her face and stopped reading the floor messages. "Oh."
Rothis gave up on
the records since they showed nothing but nonsense after the entry declaring
that the Dorflassen disappeared.
"Oh?"
"Wait a
minute, I want to check the last of the messages." Quileya scurried across the floor and bent
over the final black and white design before the red wall to the right. "They're all pretty similar, actually,
they're all part of the same message, with some parts repeated, but that's for
emphasis. It's the parts in the middle
that you read as the next line, if it was written out in ordinary, or at least,
their native language, the dorflassen language I mean. The beginnings and endings are just to encase
it properly. It must be part of the form
and makes the restitution bit very clear; no one coming in here could mistake
this for another meaning." Rothis
rolled his eyes briefly at her typical way of explaining without really
explaining, but then he perked up at the last sentence. "I think I understand now."
Tapping one foot
on the red floor, Rothis folded his arms.
"So? Tell me. Then we can figure out how awake the sentience is, possibly put it
to sleep again, and get out of here. I
don't like this place."
"You
wouldn't," Quileya mused, then
stood up straight and walked to the center of the room. "All right, here's what it says all
together, as best as I can understand, anyway." She started to speak as though she were
reciting a ballad.
"Enter
the chamber of restitution
The
price is heavy | the story is old
If
life means nothing | discard it
Like
the price that must be paid
The
chamber is here | forever it waits
The
dark | in the light
Enter
the chamber of restitution
The
debt will be paid | life will end.
"And it
repeats a couple of times, but like I said before, it's just for
emphasis."
Rothis blew out
slowly. "That's not foreboding at
all."
"Well, it's
not, not really. The message is
pertinent to any time, for always."
Quileya was scribbling away at the interpretation she was writing down
on one of the scraps of paper she kept on her person. "It's even pertinent to us, even if the
debt is not owed by us."
Rothis
blinked. "Quileya."
She didn't look
up from her paper as she made corrections to the message. "Yes?"
"The last
line, 'the debt will be paid, life will end,' you do think it just means that
the dorflassen, wherever they went, will have to pay it, don't you?"
"I think
they already did."
"Then why is
the message pertinent to us?"
"Because It
thinks everyone is in its debt. A
binding like this, well, It could make it out to apply to anyone, the way It
twists all its words to fit its own meaning."
His fingers
clenching and unclenching nervously, Rothis thought about this for about three
and a half seconds. "So in other
words, anyone who enters the chamber of restitution has to pay the debt."
"According
to It."
"And you're
not worried? This means we'll probably
have to fight our way out of here!"
Quileya finally
stopped writing and squinted instead at her companion, a patient smile on her
face. "No, Rothis, we won't. Because if It can interpret this message to
mean anyone, we can interpret it to mean the dorflassen, and they've already
paid. With their lives." Her smile dropped away. "So are we going to check on the
sentience or what?"
Rothis shook his
head in an effort to clear it of doubt.
"Right, let's do that. I
want to leave this creepy place as soon as we can."
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